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Daniel Bishop's avatar

There's something pleasing about the three "that" phrases that end the poem:

"the central turning hand

that crenellates the hills, that buttresses the roads

that wind around and through the tower gardens..."

I can't quite articulate why, but it is very nice.

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Claire Adderholt's avatar

I have no idea what it means, but I really, really enjoyed the language in the first two stanzas: sinewy

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