With an eye shot with furious, escaping blood, I follow the unstained cloud: I would also like to be moved into the mindblank stretch of white across the no-doubt difficult work of that perfect, cold cheek; the snow plain; even a rough hand's worth, like a rogue loon, too tired from following his round white mystery above the white endless hills (which around here are soft, and often sand, and frozen half the year) who lands in some green-black mirror with the clouds thrumming red above him at four in the morning (by the sting in his eyes) and the moon still there, shepherding his and the world's blood around from somewhere unreachable, red chamber after red chamber.
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"like a rogue loon, too tired
from following his round
white mystery above the white
endless hills"
Such a clear description, Sam. Nice job with this one.